Some people say it is better to work for a large company than a small company. Do you agree or disagree

What this means:

The essay is generally coherent, with a logical progression of ideas. However, some transitions between points could be smoother, and the use of cohesive devices could be more varied. For instance, phrases like 'on the opposite hand' could be replaced with 'on the other hand' for better clarity. Additionally, the conclusion could better summarize the main points.

How to improve:

• Use a clear paragraph structure
• Connect ideas with appropriate linking words
• Maintain logical progression
• Use referencing effectively

What this means:

The essay demonstrates a basic range of grammatical structures, but there are several grammatical errors that affect clarity (e.g., 'large companies often has' should be 'have', 'may struggled' should be 'may struggle', 'is more likely to wether' should be 'is more likely to weather'). These errors detract from the overall effectiveness of the writing. More complex sentence structures could also be employed to enhance the writing.

How to improve:

• Use complex sentence structures
• Maintain grammatical accuracy
• Use a variety of sentence patterns
• Check for common grammar errors

What this means:

The vocabulary used is generally appropriate, but there are several spelling errors (e.g., 'opinion', 'beneficial', 'compared', 'corporation', 'assignments', 'well-established', 'weather', 'autonomy', 'outweigh', 'match'). While some sophisticated terms are present, the repetition of certain phrases (e.g., 'small company' and 'large company') could be reduced by using synonyms or paraphrasing.

How to improve:

• Use a wider range of vocabulary
• Demonstrate awareness of collocations
• Avoid word repetition
• Use more sophisticated vocabulary accurately

What this means:

The essay addresses the prompt by presenting a clear opinion that working for a large company is preferable to working for a small one. It provides relevant reasons and examples to support this viewpoint. However, the development of ideas could be improved with more specific examples and a deeper exploration of the advantages and disadvantages of both types of companies.

How to improve:

• Address all parts of the task fully
• Support ideas with specific examples
• Develop each point thoroughly
• Stay relevant to the topic